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Wednesday 13 April 2016

Planing a Narrative Story

Writing a Narrative Story
Learning Intention: to write a narrative story .

  1. Make a copy
  2. File: Writing folder
  3. Rename: Writing a Narrative Story (name) and (name)
  4. Share: Miss D and partner
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Use your mind map from your Planning a Narrative Story doc and write your narrative into the table below.  Use the prompts in the table and your mind map to make sure you include all the information you need in each part of your narrative.  Remember that a narrative is a story, not a recount.  Be descriptive and use language features and mood words.

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Title
On the run.
Orientation

Hook: Action, dialogue, or setting
Characters:Who are they? What are they doing?
Setting: Where are the characters?
Problem: What is the problem? Hint at it
“Oi stop!”  Robin the F.B.I agent ran away through shopping market and out to the back of the building. He was being chased because he had stolen the legendary rare ruby. Robin gets trapped by the G.I Joe on a bridge. He jumps off and lands into the river leading him to their base.
Problem

What is the character/s problem? Why is it a problem? What was the character/s doing before the problem happened?
This is a problem because the ruby controls the entire world. It also controls 5 other different planets. The Moon, Mars, Sun,  Venus and Jupiter. He snuck into the museum to melt the titanium case with lava that is covering the ruby.
Explain

How are the characters going to solve the problem? What happens next? What are the events?






Robin was then surrounded by their whole group of trained agents in the base. Then one of the agents tied him to a chair next to a stream of lava, and left. “Wait!” Robin worried. They stopped and looked behind them and he was gone. Robin was so scared that he nervously jumped into the lava and screamed, “Aaaaa!” and realizes it’s fake lava and it just a hologram. Then takes him to a tunnel. The tunnel leads him through the sewer and takes him home.
Solution

What is the solution? How is the problem solved? Did the characters learn a lesson?
He finds his way home and is safe and sound. Robin learnt to never steal again. All he could think about is being a better person by never stealing again. Robin was never found again.

Revise your narrative story using DRAFT.  Paste your completed narrative story here.
This is how we plan a narrative story. First we write the orientation then the problem, explain and solution. Then we put them all together to make a story.

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