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Wednesday 21 September 2016

Quick Write


Tommy
Once upon a time there lived a courageous boy named Tommy. He lived next to beautiful  lake, with colossal boats and its big oval wooden body covering the majestic lake. Tommy's talent was to swim really good. But one day there was a person driving a boat and accidenty crashed and drowned. Tommy dived in to save him. Tommy Searched for him for a long time  and just saw him in the corner of his eye. He grabbed him and dragged him out of the lake. He was breathing and he was ok. On this day forward he is known as a great hero.
Today for writing we did quick writes. I worked with manu and we were told to choose a picture and make a 6 sentence story. We had to make 3 of them and choose one of them to put it on our blog. I chose this one because it is about brave boy named tommy who has a amazing talent.





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